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PostPosted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 7:36 pm    Post subject: Is this a good book? Reply with quote

im writing a book, here's the plot. Do you think it's okay:
Akhenaten dies ad leaves the throne to his daughter, Ankhesenamun. Ay forces Ankhsenamun to marry her cousin, tut.Soooooooooooooo,
Ankhesenamun and tut get married and have a ferturnal twins(these being alive)a boy and a girl. Ay is evil in my story, so, on the day the twins were born, he convices tut to send the twins away, and Ay askes Horhemb to erase them from all the royal records but one. (thats why no one knows about them.) So, they send them to a lord and lady. The kids grow up, like normal kids, not knowing about their secret past.Then one day the girl goes to a temple where they kept the record of who she and her brother were.The girl tells her bro all about it, and he dosent belive her, so she takes him back to the temple and shows him and...

thats all i got. this is just the plot, remember. please tell me if you have any suggestions, becauses im having a writers block right now.
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 1:23 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

i think it is, anyway. Laughing
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